Paper #1
Strengths:
- All sources are either event or up to date
- APA citations are used correctly
- Structure is very well organized
Weaknesses:
- Paragraphs and sentences run long
- Poor use of rhetorical devices, such as language
- Writing is not concise
Paper #2
Strengths:
- Citations are up to date
- Clearly differentiates the use of academic and non academic sources
- Very concise and well written
Weaknesses:
- No title page
- No head/ footer
- Incorrectly cites
Paper #3
Strengths:
- Great introduction
- APA used correctly
- Paragraphs are concise
Weaknesses:
- Does not use good language
- Cites the same sources multiple times
- Not great organization
Paper#4
- Sources up to date
- Cites well
- Good use of rhetorical devices
Weaknesses
- Very long
- Written in wrong pov
- Poor end
Paper #5
Strengths:
- Cites well
- Good use of rhetorical devices
- Great introduction
Weaknesses:
- All online sources
- Doesn't differentiate between academic and non academic sources
- Poor ending
Paper #6
Strengths:
- Cites well
- Great Sources
- Paragraphs are well formatted
Weaknesses:
- Poor ending
- Not enough citations
- Runs on
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